[Gd-chatter] r11311 - trunk/www/books/drm

[cpage at gwydiondylan.org]

Author: cpage
Date: Mon Apr 30 21:50:33 2007
New Revision: 11311

Modified:
   trunk/www/books/drm/Errata.html
   trunk/www/books/drm/Functions_Overview.html
Log:
Job: website

Added a typo erratum about the missing word "list" in the phrase "parameter
list" and corrected the DRM content.



Modified: trunk/www/books/drm/Errata.html
==============================================================================
--- trunk/www/books/drm/Errata.html	(original)
+++ trunk/www/books/drm/Errata.html	Mon Apr 30 21:50:33 2007
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@
 	  <p>
 	    The time of the binding specified by the operand (e.g. <tt>+</tt> or <tt>*</tt>) is
 	    unspecified.
-    </p>
+	  </p>
 	</blockquote>
 	
 	<p><q>operand</q> should be <q>operator</q>, yielding</p>
@@ -243,10 +243,24 @@
 	  <p>
 	    The time of the binding specified by the operator (e.g. <tt>+</tt> or <tt>*</tt>) is
 	    unspecified.
-    </p>
+	  </p>
 	</blockquote>
       </li>
       
+      <li>p. 79, in this sentence about Generic Function signatures
+	
+        <blockquote>
+          A generic function definition includes a parameter list, which
+          constrains the methods that can be added to the generic function; some
+          aspects of the parameter must be matched by any method added.
+        </blockquote>
+
+	the phrase <q>&hellip;some aspects of the parameter must&hellip;</q>
+	should refer to the parameter <em>list</em>, i.e., <q>&hellip;some
+	aspects of the parameter list must be matched by any method added.</q>
+	
+      </li>
+      
       <li>p. 83, the two constant definitions should end with semicolons.</li>
 
       <li>p. 88, the sentence before the enumerated list reads

Modified: trunk/www/books/drm/Functions_Overview.html
==============================================================================
--- trunk/www/books/drm/Functions_Overview.html	(original)
+++ trunk/www/books/drm/Functions_Overview.html	Mon Apr 30 21:50:33 2007
@@ -166,8 +166,8 @@
 	class definitions.</p>
       <p>A generic function definition includes a <a name="IX-760">parameter list</a>, which
 	constrains the methods that can be added to the generic function; some aspects of the
-	parameter must be matched by any method added. In addition, a generic function parameter
-	list may specify that all keyword arguments are permitted in a call to the generic
+	parameter list must be matched by any method added. In addition, a generic function
+	parameter list may specify that all keyword arguments are permitted in a call to the generic
 	function.</p>
       <p>Parameter list congruency is described on <a href="Parameter_Lists#XREF-837">page
 	  93</a>. The complete syntax of <code>define generic</code> is given